School Zone

Duncan Galbraith from kyoto, Japan

Great shot Michael. The two guys right frame, seem to have clocked you here, and the girl caught in mid stride looks kind of hesitant. All this cautiousness seems to be mirrored rather nicely in the sign itself. Great PP btw, this is really fine B&W.

11 Jan 2007 5:54am

Angry Buddha from United States

Nicely done.

11 Jan 2007 8:42am

Kelvin Chan from New York City, United States

yes that was the quasi-HDR image i showed you before. as for this image, there are too many things in it, making it very distracting and hard to see what you're trying to imply. you got the sign, the deli, the convenience store, etc. too many words all over the place. maybe a 1:1 crop on the two men and the lady would help. and burn/dodge the body of the two men would make them more distinguishable.

11 Jan 2007 9:00pm

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